Saturday 24 September 2011

I wrote a new rap song , it's called "money & life" , any opinion?

money %26amp; life



they used to say life cant be paid with bucks

but it can set a person's life time at max

when everything you desire is right in your hand

the ambition to have it all will never end

so if we put both life and money on the scales

which one of them you think will weigh less?

cause its all about changing to own somethin else

even paving your way right up to the success

and higherin your name's value to be called as VIP

just to sit in the front seat with some celebrities

the red rug keeps rolling along the floor when you walk

are there people who still think dat money cant talk?

cause every one has a price tag upon his forehead

and when we talk business every one goes mad

so how important the life is if it may appear on the shelf

we can buy a new one and stop taking care of oneself

so drivers wont look around before crossing the road

a thousand of citizens get run over plus buildings explode

the world will be on fire it starts the World War 3

it's all choas even money could be picked off a tree

the different is dollars can be duplicated when we want it to

while life is come from the god when he gave it to you
I wrote a new rap song , it's called %26quot;money %26amp; life%26quot; , any opinion?
It represents life issues today. Good job.
I wrote a new rap song , it's called %26quot;money %26amp; life%26quot; , any opinion?
.....Or an essay?
A lot of it doesn't rhyme unless you have a very thick accent, and when you do rhyme you never take it past one syllable. Also, the topic is too cliche, and you didn't do anything original to make an unoriginal topic less boring.
First chapter of your book?
Its alrite man. But on da real alot of it dnt rhyme. I mean but u talked about a issue we have 2day which is greed. Goob topic jus make more of it rhyme.